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Skin
We crawl out of our skin
just to get under
each other’s,
and once we’re
deep beneath one
another’s epidermis
we just lash at
the windows,
throw ourselves against
the walls,
we beat at the doors.
We rip each other
apart from the
inside out.
I think you know
that I’ve always
worn your skin,
always had your face
laid perfectly on top
of mine.
Good thing I’ve always
had your bones, too,
always felt your aches
and pains.
I own so much of you,
no wonder I’m always
trying to change.
I wonder what
you have left
of yourself?
A handful of
fingernails,
some locks of hair,
your attitude.
In my mind’s eye
Literature
Amynes
Άμυνες
Τα τείχη υψωμένα χρόνια,
δαρμένα από βροχή και χιόνια,
στην άμυνα οι πολεμιστές,
για επιδρομές και τους ληστές.
Οι πύ
Literature
''Sere breve''
Dulce es el azúcar
al igual que tus manos
como el calor de mil veranos
es el vivir en este mundo urbano
sin estar a tu lado
sin la suave y grata mirada
de tus ojos que no dicen nada.
Como olvidar que un día hablamos
nuestras manos tomamos
y miradas cruzamos
ahora todo ha cambiado
buscare en cada llano
y en cada altiplano
tus perdidos abrazos.
Agrio tus besos
como el un invierno
pero odio el caramelo
y amo el frió en los huesos
recuerdo que no he olvidado
todo lo que he silenciado.
-Conni :D
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's theme prompt: Puzzle Pieces.You know that puzzle they make for little kids, with the holes and pegs with different shapes? I always thought it was funny that while they're learning shapes, they're also learning not to put things together that don't belong. Which can be a bad thing.
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I think... this is my favourite story yet of the prompt, mostly because you've taken the prompt totally out of context and you haven't gone with the typical 'heart' thing which many have seem to have done.
I feel that the formatting is slightly excessive with 'forget' mainly... but at least you emphasise the impact the words have there.
Awesome phrasing, and... yeah, it's a wonderful concept. Very creative, and fantastically executed.
I feel that the formatting is slightly excessive with 'forget' mainly... but at least you emphasise the impact the words have there.
Awesome phrasing, and... yeah, it's a wonderful concept. Very creative, and fantastically executed.